Alcatraz 100 Word Challenge Hania Mohammed
He was stuck for ever. In the jail, and I couldn't come out of the jail, my mum and dad were so sad, and I was so sad for my mum and dad, my sister, my brother. but, Still can't get out of the jail . But finally I said “can I came out of the jail.” Mum, dad. Came for me and see if I was sick,so my mum and dad open the door. And gave me a hug. “I Hope you come back” said my mum “bye dear.”
Kia Ora Hania
ReplyDeleteIt's Alex here from mamaku hub Grey Mouth. mahi nui (Great work) on your 100 word challenge but next time you should check your spelling because when you wrote can I came out of jail weren't you meant to say can I come out of jail but other than that it is pai (good). poroporoaki pai (goodbye).